You must change the redirect URL from
https:
to
https:
An express order does not show default order data because your site must do this before and after your customers are sent to PayPal.
EDIT
As Joe says below, the difference is in adding "useraction = commit"
This tells PayPal that you expect the buyer to “make a purchase” on the PayPal site, not yours. In this way, they will show the amount to the buyer so that they can see what they are doing.
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